Daouda, is giving really good examples about what new York city will go if they don’t prepare for climate change, but in my opinion I will organize one paragraph with each example that he have and give more details, also give some scientific opinions and give my personal opinion in that part. I would do the same thing with the other paragraphs but with new examples. He has really good examples I think if he well organize his ideas he could make a really good essay.
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